To celebrate, here is a snippet of Chapter 14. Please remember this is a rough first draft, so be kind in your comments.
The training room was filled
with anxious Pack members at 7:50 AM, none of them wanting to be late. The youngsters under the age of fifteen were
in the observation room with the sound turned off so they were unable to hear and
when The Tribunal commenced the curtains would be drawn. In the middle of the training room, sitting
at three tables were the Martin, Hammond and Mendez families, facing them was a
table with four chairs and off to the side The Elders sat in chairs. Dante and the Italians were sitting on the
bleachers off to the side, so they could observe but wouldn’t disrupt the
proceedings.
At 7:59, Frank, Joe, Carlo,
Gina, Anthony and Sophia came out of one of the smaller training rooms without
glancing at the assembled Pack members. Frank
walked to the observation room and said something quietly before drawing the
curtains and pulling the door closed. Carlo, Gina, Anthony and Sophia took
their seats at the head table with Carlo and Anthony taking the center seats,
their mates at their sides. Frank stood on
the right and Joe on the left.
At exactly 8 AM, Carlo stood
up and said, “I call for this Tribunal to come to order. The charges brought against Victoria Martin,
Daisy Hammond and Jade Mendez are as follows:
betraying the future Madame Alpha, betraying the Alpha-Heir and
betraying your Pack. According to South
Mountain Pack law, the evidence will be brought forth and presented then you
will be given a chance to defend yourself.
After listening to the testimony, The Elders will decide on your guilt
or innocence and if found guilty, I will decide punishment. The punishment may range from loss of
privileges to banishment from the Pack.”
Daisy and Jade started to cry
while Victoria looked defiant as Paulo came
forward and after hitting a few buttons on his laptop, the phone calls from Victoria to the TV station were shown on a giant
projection screen followed by the emails sent from Daisy and Jade in which they
confirmed Anthony’s relationship with Victoria . Hearing gasps from the Pack members, Carlo
shouted, “QUIET.” Paulo then showed the emails
from Victoria
which said she and Anthony had been romantically involved for months, how happy
they were and how thrilled their families were. Next, the attachments to the
emails were shown: pictures of her fifteenth birthday with her and Anthony standing
close; Anthony and her brothers laughing together at football practice; her and
Gina together at a Pack function; and the last set of pictures were labeled ‘Please
use these pictures when discussing me or my family on air.’ They were professional photographs that
Senator Martin had recently done for his newest campaign showing the family in
various ‘casual’ and ‘official’ settings.
The next piece of evidence
was provided by Anthony as he projected to the entire Pack Victoria ’s behavior in the cafeteria, from
the time she first approached Anthony until CJ apologized. After he was finished, he looked to Sophia and
held her hand tightly before projecting the next image…one in which Victoria
had tried to kiss him at Rossi’s Grocery store and it showed him pushing her
away, telling her that Sophia was his mate and he would never betray her,
Victoria telling him that as a Senator’s daughter she was a much better mate
than Sophia and that as soon as she turned eighteen she would be able to take
care of his needs. More gasps were heard
but were quickly masked as Carlo looked at the Pack members.
“I’m sorry I didn’t tell you earlier, but I didn’t
want you to have anything to worry about.
I was wrong and should have told you,” Anthony said to Sophia as he squeezed her hand.
“I forgive you, but how would you feel if somebody
tried to take me away from you?”
Sophia asked gently as Anthony’s eyes turned amber and he let out a growl. “From
now on, we have to be open and honest with each other, no more secrets.” Anthony nodded and returned to his seat.
“You have heard the evidence
against them, now we will hear the defense of their actions. Jade Mendez, you will go first,” Carlo said
in a firm tone.
Jade, her parents, Jeff and
Jody and her brothers slowly stood up and tears were streaming down Jade’s face
as she opened and closed her mouth several times. Jeff leaned down and whispered, “Tell them
the truth and tell them everything, just like we talked about last night and
this morning Sweetheart.” She nodded and
took a deep breath as she felt her parents reach out and hold her hands.
“Alpha Carlo, Madame Alpha
Gina, Alpha-Heir Anthony and future Madame Alpha Sophia, the first thing I
would like to say is I’m sorry for the part I played in betraying you. I have no excuse and should have known better,
I know what I did was wrong and hope you can forgive me,” she said in a low
quivering voice. “I really have no
defense because I was thinking of myself and not my Pack or my family so I take
full responsibility for my actions and I will accept any punishment that you
deem appropriate Alpha Carlo.”
“Jade, your father said you
were pressured into doing this. Can you
project the conversations you had to me, so I can send them to the other Pack
members?” Carlo asked in a gentle yet firm voice.
Jade lowered her head,
closing her eyes as she projected the conversations she had with Daisy and Victoria . Her thoughts were disjointed and the images
jumped around and Carlo said, “Relax and concentrate Jade.” She took a deep breath and felt her fathers
strong arm around her shoulders, her mother squeeze her hand and her older
brothers Jack, Josh, Jake and Joel put their hands on her back to calm her down
even more. She concentrated harder and
the images became clearer.
Victoria telling Jade and
Daisy if they didn’t help her that she would start rumors about them; that they
were having relations with human boys, that they were disobeying their parents
and Alpha by going out without protectors, and that she had found Jade and
Daisy in a compromising position together.
After taking a deep breath she then projected the last conversation with
the three girls; Her and Daisy begging Victoria not to interfere in Anthony and
Sophia’s relationship, crying as Victoria wrote emails on their accounts and
telling them to hit ‘send’ so she could say they had sent them and not her, and
her threatening them again that she would disclose the rumors if they told on
her. After she was finished Jade let out
a strangled sob as her father engulfed her in a hug, her brothers glaring
angrily at Victoria who rolled her eyes and let out a big sigh.
Frank drew in a deep breath
and shifted his gaze to Clay Martin who had his head bowed and was staring at
the table. Sophia reached out for her
fathers hand, needing the support of not only her mate, but also her
father. As soon as he felt her small
hand touch his, he opened his clenched fist and held her hand, squeezing it reassuringly
like he had done thousands of time since she was born.
Carlo stared at Jade and her
father Jeff and said in a gentle tone, “Is there anything else you would like
to say?”
Jody handed her daughter a
Kleenex and she blew her nose before nodding her head. “I…I…just want to say how sorry I am, I knew
it was wrong and I should have stood up to her.
The only excuse I have is I didn’t want my mate to think bad things
about me, but I should have known he would believe me and not gossip.”
“Do you know who your mate is Jade?” asked Gina, closing the bond off to everyone but Jade
and her mother.
“Yes, Madame Gina, its Reggie Benedetto,” Jade said quietly before she started to cry
again. “He hasn’t said more than hello to me in a year and after today I’m not
sure he ever will.”
“Thank you for your honesty
Jade, you may sit down,” said Carlo as his gaze shifted to the second
table. Daisy was crying silently into
her fathers chest as he hugged her, her older brothers Jay, Thomas, Nicholas
and Scott were standing behind her chair glaring angrily at Victoria and her
mother was quietly crying.
“Daisy, do you have any
additional information you would like to present?” Carlo asked gently.
Daisy stood up holding
tightly to her parents hands, “I would like to say how sorry I am for allowing
this to happen Alpha Carlo. She had us
convinced our lives would be ruined if we didn’t do what she wanted. I admit I betrayed my future Madame Alpha, my
future Alpha, you, Madame Gina, my Pack and my family but most of all I
betrayed myself and my wolf.” She took
several deep breaths before continuing, “I will accept whatever punishment you
decide for me Alpha Carlo.”
Her father George whispered
in her ear and she nodded, “The only additional information I have to present
is what happened after Anthony was interviewed by the reporter.” She then projected Victoria ’s reaction to Carlo and gasps were
once again heard from the Pack members.
“Thank you Daisy, you may sit
down,” Carlo said in a gentle voice as he watched George settle his daughter on
his lap as he rocked her back and forth while she cried. Her brothers were on their knees as they
tried to soothe their sister and their mother Laura was gently clearing the
tears from her face.
All eyes moved to the third
table where the Martin family sat. CJ,
Jeff and Greg were staring off into space, Clay was still staring at the table,
Allison looked like she was about to cry and Victoria was examining her nails. Carlo narrowed his eyes and said in a
commanding voice, “Victoria
it is now your turn.”
Sophia could feel her temper
starting to boil, and felt both her mate and her father squeeze her hands. She remembered her fathers words not to let
her temper get the better of her and took a deep breath to maintain
control. “She’s wrong Arachide, with you I have everything,” Anthony said in
a soothing voice.
Carlo angrily said, “That is
the base of your defense? That you are a
Senators daughter and have political influence?” At her nod, he stood up and thundered, “LET
ME MAKE ONE THING PERFECTLY CLEAR…YOUR FATHER IS A SENATOR BECAUSE I SAY HE IS
A SENATOR, I HAVE MORE POLITICAL AND FINANCIAL INFLUENCE THAN YOUR FATHER EVER
WILL. I CAN MAKE ONE PHONE CALL AND YOUR
FATHERS POLITICAL CAREER WOULD BE OVER FOREVER AND AFTER IT’S OVER NO ONE WOULD
EVEN TAKE HIS PHONE CALLS. EVERYTHING
YOU HAVE IS BECAUSE I ALLOW YOU TO HAVE IT, I GAVE IT TO YOU AND I CAN TAKE IT
AWAY JUST AS EASILY.” Hearing their
alpha’s anger, the assembled pack members bared their necks to him in
submission.
Gina calmly reached over and
placed her hand on top of Carlo’s and he instantly felt her calming influence
through her touch and the mate bond. He
sat back down and stared at Victoria
and saw no remorse in her expression, he sighed loudly before saying, “Is there
anything else you would like to say?”
“No,” she said in a tone
devoid of all emotion as she crossed her arms over her chest and a pout crossed
her face. Her mother was crying quietly
and reached out to hold her hand, but Victoria
snatched it away while her father and brothers continued to stare off into
space.
“Before The Elders pass
judgement, is there anything the three of you would like to say?” Carlo asked
as he looked at Jade, Daisy and Victoria . Jade and Daisy shook their heads while Victoria was pulling at
a thread on her sweater.
Carlo stood and turned to the
twenty-seven Elders and said, “Please go to the smaller training room for your
deliberations.” After they filed out of
the room, he turned to the assembled Pack and said, “Those of you who need to
check on their youngsters please do so now.”
As the door to the observation room opened, everyone started smiling as
they heard the young ones singing ‘The
Wheels on the bus go round and round’.
Carlo leaned back in his chair with his eyes closed, wishing he were at
the lake and fishing with his two best friends.
Five minutes passed and Elder
Arturo Pinelli said, “We’ve reached a
decision Alpha.”
“The Elders have reached
their decision,” said Carlo and moments later everyone was in their seats. The room was completely silent as The Elders
filed into the room and Elder Arturo walked to Carlo handing him three folded slips
of paper before bowing to him and returning to his seat. Carlo unfolded the slips labeled Daisy and
Jade and looked at them before showing them to Gina, Anthony and Sophia. He stood and said in a commanding tone, “Jade and Daisy, please
stand.”
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ReplyDeleteI'm just so anxious to know what the verdict is, especially against Victoria. Although, I really hope it's not banishment. I'm afraid it will become easier for her to find those who are against SMP and aid them in hopes of getting revenge. When will this be posted? Kayla Stone is right... I should've waited too.
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This is a great book and I wait in anticipation each every time I finish reading a chapter! I hope this new chapter is out soon and that you keep writing! You have great talent.
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ReplyDeletePlease say Chapter 14 will be up soon. Slowly dying of anticipation :)
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